Sample custom college essay outline using holistic education theme

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Excerpt:

Aristotle once said that “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all”.  Every time I read or remember this quote, it fills me with a sense of purpose and responsibility.  At its heart, this quote speaks of a side of education that is, at times, neglected.  By my understanding, the education of the heart is a manner of kindling the flames of character, personality, and moral consciousness.  A full education is one that not only educates the mind, but also makes people aware of themselves, their passions and responsibilities, and giving them the preparation necessary to achieve their dreams and to contribute to society.  This is the model of education that I see in _______________ University and it is the reason why I wish to take up my college education here.

Outline:

I.  Introduction
A.  Aristotle quote: “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all”
B.  Explaining the impact of the quote
C.  Describing how the quote speaks to me and my beliefs in education
D.  Education of the heart = character, personality, moral consciousness
E.  This is why I want to take my studies with ________ University

II.  Explaining my education background
A.  During my middle school and high school life, I struggled to keep my grades up because I struggled with the transition from middle to high school.
B.  In high school, I had troubles:
i.  I was an athlete who participated in three sports.
ii.  I had a difficult time juggling my responsibilities and commitments as an athlete and as a student.
iii.  As I progressed in high school, however, my time management skills improved.
C.  I took studies more seriously and I realized the importance of having a good education.
D.  Striving to do better and to achieve the best level of education.

III.  Applying to ________ University
A.  __________ University is an institution that, I believe, has the proper educational model to help me achieve my dreams and aspirations.
B.  Not only does the school have a great educational system, but it also has other factors that contribute to both the education of the mind and that of the heart.
C.  The college is a total package (diverse student body, excellent learning environment, holistic education philosophy), one that I think will offer a wonderful experience.

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